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INVADER ZIM :: NEW FEELINGS
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"New Feelings"

Reviewed By Fubar Prelate (guest reviewer)


SCORE:
PLOT: 2/5 (It consists of four or five scenes, telegraphed plot developments, no twists whatsoever that can't be seen from a mile away.)
CHARACTERIZATION: 2/5 (Props for trying to reconcile IC personalities with a ludicrously OOC relationship.)
WRITING: 2/5 (Plenty of punctuation; just all the wrong ones in all the wrong places, is all.)
COMPLETE DISREGARD FOR COMPLETE AND UTTER VIOLENT HATRED BETWEEN CHARACTERS: 7/5

This, indeed, is a grand experiment.

Quite simply: I am MALE. As far as the FicBitches know (or can remember), I am the first guy ever to write a guest review for this site. There have been many speculations as to whether this sort of thing could work. (Ninety percent of those speculations have been from me.) As a guy -- a guy who is definitely not a fan of slash pairings -- could I objectively write a review of a story centering around it, without resorting to the typical "ewwww slash bad" reaction that some might expect? More to the point, can I seriously exude the sort of bitterness and cynicism required to contribute to FicBitches?

Let's find out. If I fail, this will never be posted, and y'all can go about your lives, blissfully unaware of my catastrophic failure.

I think I can see the germs on this fic already!Collapse )