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Star Wars :: The Pirate (http://www.masterapprentice.org/archive/p/pirate_and_padawan.html)
Leather Daddy
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Star Wars :: The Pirate and the Padawan

Review by: Leather Daddy


SCORE

PLOT: 1/5 (Save it for those weird Japanese-esque fantasy books, okay?)
CHARACTERIZATION: 0/5 ("I Was A Teenage Geisha")
WRITING: 3/5 (That's the real tragedy.)
OBI-WAN KENOBI WRITING HAIKU, DRESSING LIKE A GEISHA, AND GETTING HIS FEET BOUND: 6/5

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