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Harry Potter: The Whore (http://www.theparapet.net/ls/Spydre/whore.html)
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Harry Potter: The Whore

Reviewed by: Leather Daddy</p>

SCORE
PLOT: 2/5 (There's a plot all right, but...TWO Mary Sues. TWO.)
WRITING: 3/5 (2/5 for the dialogue. Fabio, hold me closer!)
CHARACTERIZATION: 1/5 (Lupin is probably a ball of angst underneath it all, but...)
SASSITUDE: 6/5 (Remus, girlfriend, you are just ALL THAT.)


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