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VIRTUA FIGHTER :: WILD LAMB (http://www.geocities.com/nuvsheikah/WL01.htm)
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VIRTUA FIGHTER :: WILD LAMB


Guest Review by: Gunstar Heroine

SCORE
WRITING: 3/5 (Lots of clichéd responses and repetitive word use, but not overly bad. At least the spelling and grammar are good.)
PLOT: 0/5 (Hot game guy falls madly, irreversibly in love with Mary Sue. Where have I seen this before?)
CHARACTERIZATION: 0/5 (Let’s see, uber-perfect Mary Sue, completely understanding, devoted, and non-egotistic Lion Rafale, wicked father who wants to make Mary Sue’s life miserable... lame stereotypes ahoy!)
ACTUAL VIRTUA FIGHTING: 0/5 (Zilch. Zero. Nada. Nothing.)

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